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Novus RPG / Novus digest version -- opinions wanted
« on: March 28, 2014, 07:57:28 PM »
I'm on a full-size iPad. It ultimately depends on the size of the text and boarders; if detail is small so you have to zoom in for easy reading then the double-column format is a real pain.

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Novus RPG / Novus digest version -- opinions wanted
« on: March 28, 2014, 06:17:02 PM »
In general I am in favour of the single column, as double format is annoying on an iPad and that is the primary way I consume RPGs these days.

Having looked at the samples you provide up above, I think a little more tailoring would improve them still further. Certainly, it is tricky to quickly read text when it spans the full width of the page - I would suggest a point or two of space between each line to make it easier for your eye to track.

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Novus RPG / Version 0.4 Thoughts, Typos, Etc.
« on: June 12, 2011, 02:56:46 PM »
Page 48:
"It is complex because these Codified spells were created a more flexible set of underlying rules" looks to be missing a word after 'created' - probably 'from' or 'using'.

Cheers,
Dan

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Novus RPG / Version 0.4 Thoughts, Typos, Etc.
« on: June 12, 2011, 02:50:09 PM »
Here's another typo for you: page 47
"doing 3 points od damage" should be "doing 3 points of damage"

Cheers,
Dan

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Novus RPG / Version 0.4 Thoughts, Typos, Etc.
« on: June 05, 2011, 07:41:01 PM »
P39 typo: brawling description is missing a period: "This type of attack is also known as a Brawling attack The Attack Bonus".  The second sentence presumably starts with 'The Attack Bonus'.

Cheers,
Dan

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Novus RPG / Version 0.4 Thoughts, Typos, Etc.
« on: June 05, 2011, 05:44:33 PM »
Page 50: typo: "Different branches of a School o Magic" should be 'of Magic' not 'o Magic'.

Cheers,
Dan

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Novus RPG / Version 0.4 Thoughts, Typos, Etc.
« on: June 05, 2011, 05:19:11 PM »
Page 31: the section explaining armour penalty discusses 'rigid leather' whilst the other sections all use the term 'reinforced leather'?

Cheers,
Dan

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Novus RPG / Version 0.4 Thoughts, Typos, Etc.
« on: June 05, 2011, 03:52:32 PM »
Hi,

I could be mistaken as I've only just started reading the rules but: the example of success on page 16 gives 1 Boon Point per 5 points of success.  From the thread discussing Novus on RPG.net I think this has changed to 1 Boon point per 10 points of success?

Cheers,
Dan

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