Update on Libram Novus #7

[samwise7]

I bought Libram Novus 6 and 7 yesterday.    Nice work Tim.

[imported_Rasyr]

Thanks! 

[Fidoric]

Another great work Tim, thank you.
I think it may be complemented by additional backgrounds like the ones you have made for Harp. I will try to propose some draft to you if you wish.

[Sunwolf]

Overall pretty good.
Unfortunately I think the Gremlins caused a few typos.
The cost of the Orc should be 25 points or he needs an extra stat +1
A number of the Kindred talents don't seem to have the right costs listed for their components.
I like the Ursoc and the Rachni.  Use the minor Kindred talent for Rachni and you can build a version of SpiderMan.

[imported_Rasyr]

I will double check those items in the morning.

However, doing a quick check on the Orc, it looks like the costing on the Orc is correct. It appears that you caught a typo. Charisma should be -2, not -3. If you look at the rest of the text of that paragraph, it explains that the total of the negative mods should be -4, while the total of the positive mods should be +7. I had thought that I had changed that. Come to think of it, I may have changed it, but that may have been right before MS Word crashed on me the one day (prior to the changes being saved, and I missed redoing it once I had Word back open).

As for the Kindred Talents, it would help if you were a bit more specific. However, please note that in most cases, I tried to  halve the power of the ability and then halve the cost as well (Favored Skills being the primary exception here, but it is QUITE possible that I missed something). So please, give specific examples, so that I can specifically double check them and be sure.

[Sunwolf]

If I get a chance tomorrow I'll go through it and let you know where I think there might be some typos.

[imported_Rasyr]

Great, then I can check them, and upload an updated/corrected version of the issue.

[imported_Rasyr]

Fidoric found a couple of typos....

Ursoc -- stat costs should be 6, not zero.

And Dwarven Kindred Talents, while the point totals for each Kindred Talent was correct, the individual costs for the abilities of each one had errors (i.e. I cut and pasted the abilities from the Dwarven description, and then didn't correct the costs on all of them after adjusting the power level of the ability).

With the typo correction for the Orc, this gives me enough that I will be re-uploading PDF to RPGNow in a minute, and you will be able to redownload the latest version shortly.