Favored Skills - In the Special Abilities section of the Archer, Minstrel, and Rogue it gives them 1 favored skill, is this factored into the above list of favored skills? You might want to put in something like, (factored in above). Or just remove the favored skill listed in the special abilities section since it is already listed above. It might confuse some people.
Fate Points Page 16 in the Deluxe version. You don't specify that you also get Fate Points for a Nova dice roll.
Page 18 - "Spells (p. 50) - Spells codified methods of manipulating magical energy to produce specific effects."
You are missing the word, "are" here I believe.
Page 23 you mention sneak attack in Stealth but don't go into much detail on what it does, or where it can be found.
Page 24
When acquiring Talents, the player should be cautioned
that every Character Point spent on Talents means less CPs
available for purchasing Skills, Spells and Combat Moves.
You are missing a comma after Spells.
Page 47
Once a wrestler has a foe in a Hold, he may use the
Hold to cause pain, doing 3 points od damage each
round, after the first, to the held target.
You have "od" instead of "of".
Page 49 in the little section on the right.
If is is equal to or
greater than the CTN, then the
spell was cast correctly.
You used is instead of it.
Page 52
Protection from Heat (Mj 4/Mn 5/N 6)
CTN: 22 SP Cost: 3
Vs: -- Range: Touch
Duration: 1 day
Description: The target and his equipment are protected
from natural extremes of heat (up to 150°)for the
duration.
You need a space after the parentheses.
