Open Beta version 0.7 - Typos & Corrections

[imported_Rasyr]

This is the thread for posting about typos corrections that need to be made.

The preferred format is:

Page xx
Location
Problem
Fix (if there is one)

An example might be:

Page 19
Right column, Thieves' Cant paragraph
Paragraph is unfinished

or

Page 19
Left column, 3rd paragraph
The modifier for running is listed at -3 when it should be -2.

(Note: both these examples are fakes)

Using this sort of format makes it much, much easier for me to find the indicated problems and fix them.

Thanks!!

[samwise7]

Page 9
Whole page
It seems like all of the text is Bold.

Page 121
Whole page
It seems like all of the text is Bold.

Sorry, I didn't mean to say that I disliked the medieval banner, just the way that it was used.  You made the point that it was to break up text and not to be used after every section.  That being said I think you could use the medieval banner, the sword, quarterstaff, etc. to put in some variety.  I think I like the banner more than the quarterstaff, but the other ones are good too.

[Fidoric]

Page 111
Location: first line of ghoul description
Problem: it is written : "A Ghoul appears as a highly emancipated figure",
Fix:  I think it should read :  a highly emaciated figure.

Page 111
Location: end of first paragraph of ghoul description.
Problem: the end of the sentence has been cut off.
Fix: Maybe you could complete it ? 

[samwise7]

Page 121
Location: bottom right
Image seems very pixilated

[imported_Rasyr]

Comment on page 9 and 121 -- I see what you are saying when I look at the PDF, but when I go into the pagemaker file, it is the same as the pages before and after it (normal text with a few bolded words). Now, I did run a file size reduction on the PDFs, so it is possible that it did that during that process.

[imported_Rasyr]

Ghoul -- man I hate when I end in the middle of a sentence like that... heheh... now I have to go back and try to figure out what the hell I was trying to say...

[imported_Rasyr]

page 3
center column, under the Equipment listing
"Weapons" is listed twice

[imported_Rasyr]

Here are a few other things that I need to fix....

1) Firing into Melee - We have discussed this in another thread - changing it to simple Spd Saves against the original total attack roll (including any/all modifiers against the original target).

2) Fighter -- as was recently pointed out, he actually has more capabilities than he should have (i.e. shield training)

3) Encumbrance -- still lists encumbrance modifiers as modifiers to Dex/Spd stat bonuses -- need to change that so that it is to dex and speed rolls (skills & Saves)

4) Equipment -- Need to adjust volume/weight capacities for Backpacks (2 cu. ft; 40 lbs) and Framepacks (5 cu. ft; 100 lbs), and add a "small steel mirror" to the list of equipment.

[imported_Rasyr]

I have also added a new Universal spell called "Dispel Magic"