Novus 2e Beta Corrections and Comments thread!

[Rasyr]

This is where you want to post comments about things needing corrections and/or potential changes (ideas) for the rules.

While I will not promise to use every suggestion, I will consider everything posted.

[Rasyr]

Completed changed will be made bold and green in color. Changes that will not be made will be made bold and  maroon in color.

Page 96 --

Khonshi Spell Sphere needs changed to Cerriwn Spell Sphere.[/li]
   

Woden spelling needs to change to Wodyn (this is to match the spelling that will be used in Anwyn)[/li]
   

Under Cerriwn and Ogmion - in the spells section, both mention "these Clerics". Should be changed to "Cerriwn's Clerics" and "Ogmion's Clerics" respectively[/li]
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Page 9 --

Odav should be changed to Odavi in the section about Orcs.[/li]
   

Changed Kindred to Kindred Talents and renamed each full Talent to be <race name> Kindred.[/li]
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Page 12 --

Changed/fixed the sidebar oval, so that it had even spacing both above and below the text inside it, and added a border around it.[/li]
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[Fidoric]

Hi Rasyr,

it's been a long time since the last proofreading. :-)

I haven't read much yet but I found this version cool.

So far I have spotted three things (on Beta version):

On page 45, there are still mentions to type 1 & 2 secondary damages. Those no longer exist I think.[/li]
   

Not sure if it is intended but Culture do not give any CP or XP leading to a starting character with only 80XP.[/li]
    [li]On page 44, first paragraph mentions 'Backgrounds' which no longer exist.[/li]
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I will have spare time in the next days for a thorough reading.

Congrats for this excellent job! I think you are very near to the final version.

[Fidoric]

The character sheet displays a background area which is no more needed.

[Rasyr]

On page 44, first paragraph mentions 'Backgrounds' which no longer exist.

Could not find this. I even did a word search in the PDF for the word "Backgrounds" without finding it. Will search again for "Background"

Congrats for this excellent job! I think you are very near to the final version.

I am hoping so... Working on writing Anwyn now for the most part.

[Rasyr]

The character sheet displays a background area which is no more needed.

Removed it, and moved the other bubbles up one, and put "Lift Weight" in the last bubble, removing it from Secondary Stats (now that I had someplace to move it to)......

 

[Fidoric]

Could not find this. I even did a word search in the PDF for the word "Backgrounds" without finding it. Will search again for "Background"

my bad, it's on page 42, second line.

[Rasyr]

my bad, it's on page 42, second line.

fixed by simply adding the word "Options" behind it.... :-)

[Rasyr]

Character Sheet -- removed the Threshold boxes for the different types of Wounds. The new critical table delivers them in a different manner.

[Rasyr]

Page 25 -- Changed Foraging and Riding skills from Specialties (i.e. each variation of the skill must be purchased separately) to Proficiencies. 

[Rasyr]

Page 18 -- Fixed Skill List table to properly reflect if skill is Specialty/Proficiency or Base (had to fix 4 skills - Targeting, Foraging, Riding, and Survival). 

[silverlionprime]

Adding as I go along:

Page 5: Advantages, Major & Minor text not bolded.

Page 5. stength under armor rating, rather than strength

Page 5: This is a modifer to the DT and weapon skill groups in which the character has no skills based on their best melee skill bonus, Awkward and unclear wording.|

Page 6: Bacground Option, under "Select Background Options."

Page 10: Underhill, indivudal homes

Page 12: Mystic/Mental Fortitude: Chracter

[Rasyr]

Background Options -- Disadvantages -- changed Disadvantages to Drawbacks  

[Fidoric]

P6 under Select training path, mid paragraph, mention to «tiers in Combat Styles» not relevant anymore.

[Trentin Bergeron]

Page 18, Column 1, 2nd paragraph. THe should be The..

Page 32, Column 2, under Web Spinners, 2nd sentence; numbe should be number..