Version 0.4 Thoughts, Typos, Etc.

[dbm]

Hi,

I could be mistaken as I've only just started reading the rules but: the example of success on page 16 gives 1 Boon Point per 5 points of success.  From the thread discussing Novus on RPG.net I think this has changed to 1 Boon point per 10 points of success?

Cheers,
Dan

[imported_Rasyr]

I could be mistaken as I've only just started reading the rules but: the example of success on page 16 gives 1 Boon Point per 5 points of success.  From the thread discussing Novus on RPG.net I think this has changed to 1 Boon point per 10 points of success?

Yeah, that example is something that needs fixing.

[dbm]

Page 31: the section explaining armour penalty discusses 'rigid leather' whilst the other sections all use the term 'reinforced leather'?

Cheers,
Dan

[imported_Rasyr]

Good catch! -- Am slowly working towards getting version 0.5 ready for release, so as many corrections as possible are welcome...

[dbm]

Page 50: typo: "Different branches of a School o Magic" should be 'of Magic' not 'o Magic'.

Cheers,
Dan

[dbm]

P39 typo: brawling description is missing a period: "This type of attack is also known as a Brawling attack The Attack Bonus".  The second sentence presumably starts with 'The Attack Bonus'.

Cheers,
Dan

[Fidoric]

In the weapon description table, the short sword has a base damage of 4., ie the same as the dagger.
I suggest to make it 6, halfway between dagger (4) and broadsword (

[samwise7]

The page numbers are from the free version.  Sorry if some of these are duplicates, but I'm trying to type these out and then get back to prepping for my Monday game. 

[samwise7]

Found another one.  The Grimalkin has a +97 attack bonus.  This is probably a D100 hold out.  You might want to check over the other monsters to see if they have similar typos.

[imported_Rasyr]

Found another one.  The Grimalkin has a +97 attack bonus.  This is probably a D100 hold out.  You might want to check over the other monsters to see if they have similar typos.

This was brought up in another post. Actually, it is a typo, where I forgot to delete the 7 after putting the 9 in place...

[samwise7]

Some mention of Diseases and Poisons might be good as well.

[imported_Rasyr]

Okay, I have a few things done so far.

Also, I HAVE replaced the 5 spell users with a single one, and a table allowing for 6 types of spell users.

[Fidoric]

Any chance to see something like that for other professions (aka archetypes or Irregular Novus ?) 

[imported_Rasyr]

I might possibly add a "Martial Artist" as that would not be extremely hard to do (and I say Martial Artist and not Monk, cause they are different things).

As for other classes, I will eventually be officially displaying the rules that I used in creating the classes, though you can find a quick overview in some of the other threads.

[dbm]

Here's another typo for you: page 47
"doing 3 points od damage" should be "doing 3 points of damage"

Cheers,
Dan